Help Me
Help me,
Stop crying,
Help me,
Make my heart stop bleeding,
Help me,
Stop breaking,
Help me,
Stop the shaking,
Help me,
Erase the memories,
Help me,
just erase everything,
Help me,
Just let me forget about you.
Help me,
stop the bleeding,
Help me,
stop cutting,
Help me,
stop remembering,
Help me,
stop loving you.
Help me,
please, I’m begging,
Help me,
I’m slowly dying,
Help me,
my hearts stop beating,
Help me,
my spirit is retreating,
Help me,
I’m no longer breathing,
Help me, please?
Emma Haze
I saw this poem today and thought it fits help. com perfectly.
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it’s really created for Help.com…thanks for sharing this great poem.
It is Not a poem!
It is a group of words repeated over and over again.
FatB.Three wrote:
It is Not a poem!
It is a group of words repeated over and over again.
it’s a wight poem!
*Fairytale* wrote:
FatB.Three wrote:
It is Not a poem!
It is a group of words repeated over and over again.it’s a wight poem!
Then; it’s CRAP poem!
It does not rime.
FatB.Three wrote:
*Fairytale* wrote:
FatB.Three wrote:
It is Not a poem!
It is a group of words repeated over and over again.it’s a wight poem!
Then; it’s CRAP poem!
It does not rime.
yes…it’s kind of new poem just like sentences.
d-man wrote:
its RAP Music ….. u guys don’t get it …lol
could be suitable for Rap…you should work on this.
Help Meeeeeeeeeee entertain you!!!!
Whose line is that????
Rosie’s are Red, Violets are Blue, and Jackie’s are Wight!
I have seen them on the washing line…
Is this a poem?
okei! wrote:
i open the post thinking babacup needs help and ready to rescue
lol well, mine ishelp me i am eating
help me i am gaining
help me i am increasing lol
help me i am eating
help me i am losing
help me i am reducing
help me i am thin like a pin!!!
i can make poem
Poems do not have to rhyme to be called poems. Some do. Some don’t.
One of the best (and deserves repeating):
“You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I’ll rise.
Does my sassiness upset you?
Why are you beset with gloom?
‘Cause I walk like I’ve got oil wells
Pumping in my living room.
Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I’ll rise.
Did you want to see me broken?
Bowed head and lowered eyes?
Shoulders falling down like teardrops.
Weakened by my soulful cries.
Does my haughtiness offend you?
Don’t you take it awful hard
‘Cause I laugh like I’ve got gold mines
Diggin’ in my own back yard.
You may shoot me with your words,
You may cut me with your eyes,
You may kill me with your hatefulness,
But still, like air, I’ll rise.
Does my sexiness upset you?
Does it come as a surprise
That I dance like I’ve got diamonds
At the meeting of my thighs?
Out of the huts of history’s shame
I rise
Up from a past that’s rooted in pain
I rise
I’m a black ocean, leaping and wide,
Welling and swelling I bear in the tide.
Leaving behind nights of terror and fear
I rise
Into a daybreak that’s wondrously clear
I rise
Bringing the gifts that my ancestors gave,
I am the dream and the hope of the slave.
I rise
I rise
I RISE.”
–Maya Angelou
FatB.Three wrote:
*Fairytale* wrote:
FatB.Three wrote:
It is Not a poem!
It is a group of words repeated over and over again.it’s a wight poem!
Then; it’s CRAP poem!
It does not rime.
A Poem doesn’t have to rhyme. Of course many people prefer a poem that rhymes but it’s not a rule.
Actually, i find this poem quite beautiful.
southern_comfort, IP wrote:
Poems do not have to rhyme to be called poems. Some do. Some don’t.One of the best…
I agree. it is a good one.
okei! wrote:
i open the post thinking babacup needs help and ready to rescue
lol well, mine ishelp me i am eating
help me i am gaining
help me i am increasing lol
I love that you were ready to come to my rescue! Makes me happy to know that when I am in need of help, you are here : )
southern_comfort, IP wrote:
Poems do not have to rhyme to be called poems. Some do. Some don’t.One of the best (and deserves repeating):
–Maya Angelou
I love listening to here recite this poem. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JqOqo5…
Julfelrodmo wrote:
FatB.Three wrote:
*Fairytale* wrote:
FatB.Three wrote:
It is Not a poem!
It is a group of words repeated over and over again.it’s a wight poem!
Then; it’s CRAP poem!
It does not rime.A Poem doesn’t have to rhyme. Of course many people prefer a poem that rhymes but it’s not a rule.
Actually, i find this poem quite beautiful.
I like it too. I do not think a poem has to rhyme.
Thanks for sharing that poem :)
Here is one that I like even though I usually like rhyming ones.
if you like my poems let them by E. E. Cummings
if you like my poems let them
walk in the evening,a little behind you
then people will say
“Along this road i saw a princess pass
on her way to meet her lover(it was
toward nightfall)with tall and ignorant servants.”
it’s very nice
Thank you, Plus i ordered the CD from Big Daddy Weave
I havn’t bought music in a very long time
Thank you :)
griffin195 wrote:
it’s very nice
Thank you, Plus i ordered the CD from Big Daddy Weave
I havn’t bought music in a very long time
Thank you :)
I am really liking Big Daddy Weave too. Nice to start to the day with some uplifting music.
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