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Crazy?

As we hurtle through the sky
We spend our seconds dreaming, loving, writing, caring, hating, and fighting
We connect and disconnect
Turn on the television, turn it off
Outside
We feel the sun on our skin
Running, walking, sleeping, talking

Beating the pavement with our souls

Can you feel the ground pulsing?
I can.
Can you feel the earth spinning?
It gives me vertigo.

The sky never stops
We are all angels, all magical creatures
If you can dream with me
We can paint it
And they will come.

I wish there was more than words.
But I cannot touch you all
I can only close my eyes and feel

Fly, fly, little bird.

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Always griffin offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (6 hours, 33 minutes after post)

yes, oh sorry thought that was it

very interesting L)

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Crazy?
As we hurtle through the sky
We spend our seconds dreaming, loving, writing, caring, hating, and fighting
We connect and disconnect
Turn on the television, turn it off
Outside
We feel the sun on our skin
Running, walking, sleeping, talking

Beating the pavement with our souls

Can you feel the ground pulsing?
I can.
Can you feel the earth spinning?
It gives me vertigo.

The sky never stops
We are all angels, all magical creatures
If you can dream with me
We can paint it
And they will come.

I wish there was more than words.
But I cannot touch you all
I can only close my eyes and feel

Fly, fly little bird.

verge offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 134 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (8 hours, 16 minutes after post)

Sweet. Maybe I’ll paint it. :)

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babacup offline Verified User (5 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Indianapolis, IN, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (9 hours, 38 minutes after post)

This makes me think about when I am laying in the grass out in yard or at a park. My eyes are closed and I am in a meditative state. I feel one with the earth. I feel the pulse, I feel like I can feel the movement of the earth. I close my eyes and I can feel!

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Snar online Verified User (5 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 67 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (1 day after post)

babacup wrote:
This makes me think about when I am laying in the grass out in yard or at a park. My eyes are closed and I am in a meditative state. I feel one with the earth. I feel the pulse, I feel like I can feel the movement of the earth. I close my eyes and I can feel!

Yes :)

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lisalovesalic offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (2 days, 4 hours after post)

Beautiful:)

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jelmer-j offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 1 week ago (1 week, 1 day after post)

Is this about buddhism?

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Snar online Verified User (5 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 67 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 1 week ago (1 week, 1 day after post)

jelmer-j wrote:
Is this about buddhism?

If you feel it is?

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