“It’s Just YOU”
I walked as though there was no road
Of which I’d take to turn
You held my hands oh so cold
You knew i had to run
I never trust I never see
the pain left from the past
The foolish me i could not begin
To forget it not that fast
A little smile, your lovely eyes
You took it all to understand
My foolish games, my silly songs
You gazed and took my hand
Another kiss, another song
Chances, they are a few
I take the road, i take the turn
and there’s no one there but you
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Hello thanks katie! xox! hope u have a nice day! will be here if you need someone to talk with.
lilie nice poem,
can u write a funny one for me?next time.
thanks mucho. itd be great if youll write it urself but sure try. tell me the situation then ill try.:o)
ok lets see situation
a guy sees a girl,dreams abt her,finally went to speak to her,then suddenly her hubby comes ….u fill it up ,add some situations,incident :)
ouch! that actually happened to you?! good thing i wasnt there. that kind of thingy does not suit my inspiration. if you take a look at my new poem above, it’s all about love and trusting again. :P
hahah funny it didnt happen to me ,u asked a situation so here it is…romantic poet :)
will try my friend, next week ,hectic week ahead ,exams so got to prepare….
hello apach_tea, thank you so much. so how’s the application going? submitted ur resume to momy adria? :o)
Nice poem Lilies! really touching … can you do 1 abt men next time! lol
I was totally adopted, i feel loved. thanks for asking. and your very welcome
Hello Ditzy Squidgy! :P thanks friend…actually ive thought of that LOL ill make one and we’ll let every man read it! hahah!
Nice poem! It’s good to see some happiness on here as well!
hi cygnet! thanks so much. yeah a lot of happiness going on here, we need some of it! haha it keeps us going.
thats a really gd poem its brightened up my day :)
thank you for taking time reading this post. i’m glad there’s a smile on your face. wow. awesome screen name!
thats good
Happy mother’s day!!I read your profile and it said you were a single mom.My mom was a single mom too.Thanks for the advice about my mom.You made me feel better..
thanks to you dearie,hugs! :o) yeah not a very easy undertaking but when love is there, then it would be so much lighter. your mom is happy where she is. and she’s proud of you.do good in ur studies. that’s all u can do to make her happy.take care and give me a shout when u can.:o)
I know she is happy,but I still miss her…I’ll do good in my studies and go to college and be a doctor like she wanted me to be.The only reason is for her.Hugs to you too,friend!
thank you so much for taking time to read the poem. asecretsilence.sounds deep.
That was a really nice poem-I enjoyed it much!
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