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This poem was written by a terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital.

It was sent by a medical doctor.

SLOW DANCE
Have you ever watched kids on a merry-go-round?
Or listened to the rain slapping on the ground?
Ever followed a butterfly’s erratic flight?
Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?
You better slow down.
Don’t dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won’t last.
Do you run through each day on the fly?
When you ask How are you? Do you hear the reply?
When the day is done, do you lie in your bed.
With the next hundred chores running through your head?
You’d better slow down
Don’t dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won’t last.
Ever told your child, we’ll do it tomorrow?
And in your haste, not see his sorrow?
Ever lost touch, let a good friendship die.
Cause you never had time to call and say,”Hi”
You’d better slow down.

Don’t dance so fast.

Time is short.

The music won’t last.

When you run so fast to get somewhere,
You miss half the fun of getting there.

When you worry and hurry through your day,

It is like an unopened gift….Thrown away.

Life is not a race.

Do take it slower

Hear the music

Before the song is over.

Dear All:
This young girl has 6 months left to live, and as her dying wish, she wanted to send a letter telling everyone to live their life to the fullest, since she never will.

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Katie offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
GB | 2 years, 7 months ago (3 minutes after post)

Wow.
I try and live my life to the fullest and take every mistake as a lesson.
She really doesn’t deserve this, no-one does.

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JoJo offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Fort Collins, CO, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (17 minutes after post)

That was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing her wisdom with us. I will say a prayer for her and her family.

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rlt7 offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Saint Meinrad, IN, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (6 hours, 23 minutes after post)

I ve had two very good friends die from cancer one from blood cancer one from
breast cancer I have afriend who lost her right breast to cancer my dad has
throat cancer he no longer can talk. They told my dad he would be dead two years ago, so don’t stop loving or praying seems funny noone believes untill it’s proven I hope it’s proven

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MiZz_ChEeKi offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Warrane, 06, AU | 2 years, 7 months ago (12 hours, 44 minutes after post)

My prayers are with your father rlt7

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2 years, 7 months ago (1 day, 5 hours after post)

This is a wonderful poem, and I love it so much. I’ve sent the poem to many people and told them about it… only I didn’t tell them about the terminally ill girl that wrote it… I feel like a total jerk saying this (hence the anonymisity), but, it was written by a child phsycologist, not a girl.

http://www.snopes.com/inboxer/medical…

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bllawso offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
Lawton, OK, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (1 day, 8 hours after post)

thanks for sharing that. its a beautiful poem, and i wrote it down on in a notebook so i could always have it . again thanks

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MiZz_ChEeKi offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Warrane, 06, AU | 2 years, 7 months ago (1 day, 9 hours after post)

Anonymous, thanks for sharing this piece of information about the poem. Its amazing how people can make such false emails and send it around to people, I really wonder what the purpose of this chain email was about, maybe to collect our email addresses and send us hundreds of spam mail? Who knows. Although its a lovely poem, its disheartening that someone would fake such a story. Once again, thanks, and there is no need to remain anonymous :)

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tcarstense offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Emeryville, CA, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (1 day, 22 hours after post)

Okay - I got it twice in a row awhile back (as a chain letter) and sent it on… one of my friends emailed me back with the truth. I ended up forwarding the snopes URL to everyone who had sent it to me AND everyone who had gotten it from me.

It is sad that someone would try to lie about that, but I don’t really care that much about where it comes from. I just like the poem a lot. It is true, no matter where it came from, and I try to slow down. It’s the little things in life that matter, the ’stopping to smell the roses’ moments that prove to be a person’s favorites.

Also, cancer is a serious thing, and a terrible thing… but I don’t believe that nobody deserves this (I can think of several people who deserve much worse than this, historically). She (the sforementioned hypothetical girl with cancer) couldn’t possibly have done anything yet in her life that seems to make her deserving of this; indeed she doesn’t have cancer because of something she did, but because of who she is. She is human, and that fact has implications not limited to the physical parts of being human; there are spiritual parts too. Unlike the popular thoughts on man being inherently good, humankind is inherently evil. All the thoughts of man are constantly evil. Is it harder for anyone to do the good thing, or to do the bad thing (and here’s the kicker- I’m talking about doing the good thing BECAUSE IT IS THE RIGHT THING TO DO, NOT because other people praise you or reward you for it!) The truth is, humans constantly desire to do evil, and that IS A FAULT ALL HUMANS SHARE. You can say it’s genetic, in a way. So you see, Humans deserve evil for the sins of humankind, and their own personal sins. Even if she (the same girl) had never yet done anything wrong in her life, she would still be in a way deserving of eternal torture, not just cancer, because she is human.

Why aren’t all humans tortured then is a tough question. I belive that God is warning us when we see something like this happening. He is warning that if an innocent girl suffers this much, we shouldn’t say Hah, she deserved it, but we shouldn’t say, its not fair. Instead we should look back and say, I am so much worse than her, if she is suffering that much, where do I belong? It says in the book of luke… (Luke 13:1-5)

1Now there were some present at that time who told Jesus about the Galileans whose blood Pilate had mixed with their sacrifices. 2Jesus answered, “Do you think that these Galileans were worse sinners than all the other Galileans because they suffered this way? 3I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish. 4Or those eighteen who died when the tower in Siloam fell on them—do you think they were more guilty than all the others living in Jerusalem? 5I tell you, no! But unless you repent, you too will all perish.”

By the way, perish here is referring to something a lot worse than cancer.

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tcarstense offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Emeryville, CA, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (1 day, 22 hours after post)

BTW, I was anonymous…

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