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So Far Away

This poem is written
With those in mind
Who wish they may meet
One day in time

I look In the night sky
And see the north star
Close my eyes and dream
Then suddenly there you are

West in the Pacific
Far and away
Now is my night
Now is your day

I look In the night sky
There is a full moon
Close my eyes
And dream of you soom

There is not a moment
In one long day
That I wished
you could be here to stay

Then one day
You will cross the sea
within that day
You will be here with me

Your heart and soul
Is here to stay
But you still remain
So far away

This is my first poem
At HELP dot com
Hope ya like it
The damage is done

Denny

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~.^.~ offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 56 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 7 months ago (1 minute after post)

Oh wow! I really like this. Thanks for sharing it.

The new poet Denny.

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Infidel Jester offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Santa Monica, CA, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (6 minutes after post)

:-)

I like it! Thanks!

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 7 months ago (26 minutes after post)

aw, that’s lovely den :)

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adrianna offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Atlanta, GA, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (57 minutes after post)

Denny that was AWESOME! Thanks for sharing it and for the millionth time - thanks for getting me addicted to HELP.COM :)

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Mï†z¥-superMODel offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Help.com Volunteer Moderator Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Tullahoma, TN, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (1 hour, 5 minutes after post)

Very good!!!

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Fort Collins, CO, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (2 hours, 3 minutes after post)

That was really nice

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Ditzy offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 40 #
Ventura, CA, US | 2 years, 7 months ago (10 hours, 6 minutes after post)

Denny! wow! that is soooo good! looks like you dont need your personal poet any more hahaha j/k

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 7 months ago (11 hours, 3 minutes after post)

very good denny well done any one sees this can say for sure this man in love

it really emotional

good work

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 7 months ago (11 hours, 41 minutes after post)

Thats pretty good man, I always knew you were a poet underneath the rugged character. hahaha

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 7 months ago (12 hours, 24 minutes after post)

Eversince i knew this was you. :o) just so you.

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Bandeirante, 29, BR | 2 years, 7 months ago (22 hours, 9 minutes after post)

great!

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