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true :) still i cant believe any1 likes them
i guess, i hope. mabye ill put it in da school news paper. all the poems they print now are just kids imitatin, careful ryming structure instead of writing how they think
i think ur peoms are awesome
and im glad that u think the ppl here are nice.
i think the same way =D
thanks for the compliment, but what makes them awesome?
the way they flow.
when i read them if feel as if im living them.
they are so…….
hum… i cant think of the right words…
they are so……
i love peoms =D
they just make my day.
and love how you can just easaly share them.
i would never want to share mine.
im to scared that every1 will hate them.
cuz mine dont really make sence.
some times i think every1 will hate mine, and that they dont make sense, but ppl love them any way. so share one
i will tomorrow. im gonna go now.
i really need to sleep i think i might have a cold
oh, okay. i look forward to the poem!
i hate how the rain can fall with such depression and joy.
i love how the snow can fall gracfuly and twist in the air like a ballarina.
i hate how the thunder storms are so loud and talkitive.
i love how the lighting is so bright and ful of energy.
i hate how the good days go by fast and the bad days go by slow.
i love how the day may not go as planed but no matter what…im smileing at the end.
and yes i came back on cuz i cant sleep.
my head hurts way to much and i just cant close my eyes.
it’s good, it dosnt suck!
i think it does.
i lacks interesting detals and a deep meaning
its like a second grader peom.
bah, dont be so critical, poems dont have to be terribly deep you now
i know but mine barly has a meaning at all
its just……..hum… well… its just there.
now im really gonna go and take some asprin or something and try to sleep.
good luck, if that dosnt work i’ll be on for awhile
mmmm, pie. go and write away! and share it 2 please!
that poem makes me hungry! lol
what u think about that?
cookies and icecream
what a delicious dream
im walking on a road of chocolate
and see my friend marvin
hes a candy-man and i say “dude im starvin”
i pop his head like a bottle of kris
dam thats a taste that u wont miss
ppl round the block tend 2 call me fat
guess what: imma eat them, just like that
lol its sick :D
enjoy ur snack will :)
and btw: ppl at help really ARE nice :)
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