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Old Act.

La Jolla, CA, US

Wow everyone at help is nice!

when i shared alll my poems every one really liked them! mabye i’ll share with more people!

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (11 minutes after post)

true :) still i cant believe any1 likes them

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (14 minutes after post)

i guess, i hope. mabye ill put it in da school news paper. all the poems they print now are just kids imitatin, careful ryming structure instead of writing how they think

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (17 minutes after post)

i will!

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (18 minutes after post)

i think ur peoms are awesome
and im glad that u think the ppl here are nice.
i think the same way =D

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (19 minutes after post)

thanks for the compliment, but what makes them awesome?

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (22 minutes after post)

the way they flow.
when i read them if feel as if im living them.
they are so…….
hum… i cant think of the right words…
they are so……
awesome.
haha

i love peoms =D
they just make my day.
and love how you can just easaly share them.
i would never want to share mine.
im to scared that every1 will hate them.
cuz mine dont really make sence.

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (24 minutes after post)

some times i think every1 will hate mine, and that they dont make sense, but ppl love them any way. so share one

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (26 minutes after post)

i will tomorrow. im gonna go now.
i really need to sleep i think i might have a cold

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (27 minutes after post)

oh, okay. i look forward to the poem!

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (40 minutes after post)

i hate how the rain can fall with such depression and joy.
i love how the snow can fall gracfuly and twist in the air like a ballarina.
i hate how the thunder storms are so loud and talkitive.
i love how the lighting is so bright and ful of energy.
i hate how the good days go by fast and the bad days go by slow.
i love how the day may not go as planed but no matter what…im smileing at the end.

it sucks.
and yes i came back on cuz i cant sleep.
my head hurts way to much and i just cant close my eyes.

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (41 minutes after post)

it’s good, it dosnt suck!

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (42 minutes after post)

i think it does.
i lacks interesting detals and a deep meaning
its like a second grader peom.

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (44 minutes after post)

bah, dont be so critical, poems dont have to be terribly deep you now

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (45 minutes after post)

i know but mine barly has a meaning at all
its just……..hum… well… its just there.

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scream silence 19 #
Sayreville, NJ, US | 6 years ago (47 minutes after post)

now im really gonna go and take some asprin or something and try to sleep.

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (47 minutes after post)

good luck, if that dosnt work i’ll be on for awhile

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (51 minutes after post)

mmmm, pie. go and write away! and share it 2 please!

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (1 hour, 7 minutes after post)

that poem makes me hungry! lol

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pop #
DE | 6 years ago (1 hour, 19 minutes after post)

what u think about that?

cookies and icecream
what a delicious dream
im walking on a road of chocolate
and see my friend marvin
hes a candy-man and i say “dude im starvin”
i pop his head like a bottle of kris
dam thats a taste that u wont miss
ppl round the block tend 2 call me fat
guess what: imma eat them, just like that

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Old Act. 1 #
La Jolla, CA, US | 6 years ago (1 hour, 22 minutes after post)

haha, nice

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pop #
DE | 6 years ago (1 hour, 25 minutes after post)

lol its sick :D
gnight yall
enjoy ur snack will :)

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pop #
DE | 6 years ago (1 hour, 26 minutes after post)

and btw: ppl at help really ARE nice :)

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