thanks ACE my hearts with you babe
the third stanza is the most awkward to me. of course you were just keeping in the rhyme scheme but “charms” doesn’t quite fit. i dunno why so i suppose that critique isn’t all that helpful. lol
all in all it was pleasant. not breathtaking but quite nice.
=D good job.
thanks for the comment. :o) it’s never posted in a contest and it’s all from the heart dearie.and that’s what matters most. thanks!
of course that’s what matters!
i personally wouldn’t want my poems in a contest, i would be too nervous that people wouldn’t understand them. not the actual words of course but the meaning behind those words.
I’m just glad she’s thinking of me when she writes them
awww. wow then i shouldn’t be here if it is y’all’s poem.
so ttyl
just wished I could write poems for you to ace
aawwee, well u wrote one for me already! :o) and it was really good!
well, two of them actually! very awesome poems.
yea but It takes me days to write them
it doesn’t matter how long it takes.now go back to chat. :o)
Good job, thanks for sharing!!
weee weee! thanks Mitzy! for some strange reasons i could not get into your shoutbox! okay, will try it again. :o)
Yeah my shoutbox got broken and no one can shout me except by inviting me to posts, hopefully they can get it fixed soon :D
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wow your really good at writing poetry you should put some of your poems on a poetry forum like http://www.everypoet.org/ its really good and you can read other poets work and help them out. good job its a great poem.
it isn’t exactly Shakespeare…but what matters is that your poem has feeling…I can tell you were very inspired to write this….with time and practice, I know you’re going to shape up into a great poet.:-)
ssika, thank you for reading. ;)
kiki-ciw , that means so much to me, i’ll visit that link and will let you know how it is going.
wandering/soul, i was talking with my inspiration while i was writing this simple poem. it was meant to be a letter on an email then it turned out to be a poem before i sent it! lol thank you. i hope things are better now. drop me a note when you feel like talking.
I’m not in luv 4 a long time. tips pls? O.o n’ how to keep relationship grow strong?
hello Amanda. First of all thank you for reading this post. this ain’t something so spicy but rather plain and simple. :o)
anyway, in my opinion love comes when it is destined to come. although a lot of people would say they don’t want to wish it would happen but they want to ‘make’ it happen. i too believe in that however i’ve realized some people waste too much time looking for love, rush on too much as if there is not tomorrow, pressured by friends etc. but i think relaxing about things is one way to keep things in control. just be open to a lot of possibilities and treasure what you have and love yourself. love is always there and it will just come to you when you are ready.
there is no formula to successful relationships. if i have known about it then i would never experienced hurt in the past. it is always chemistry and magic. it’s all about trust and consideration. :o)
are u new here at help? if so, welcome to help. com community. see ya around.:o)
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That’s beautiful :) I love, live, and BREATHE poetry :)
hi there, thank you for dropping by this post. :o) you should write one too. and share it with us.^-^
Hi its Chloé, I remember we spoke before. That is a beautiful poem just to say. I was just wondering if you could help me. My most recent problem I am really stuck with and have no idea what to do who to go with or to even go with anyone. No - one seems to be helping me at the moment so I was wondering if you could.
Thank you.x.x. =)
hello there chloe Thank you!, i just got online. okay, ill be attending to your post shortly and i’ll see what i can do. hang on.:o)
Thank you, Im just really stuck and have no idea what to do, but hey I never know what to do so whats new. Thank you for helping me =) xx
you are always welcome chloe, i have not talked with you for a long time i think. i just got home and i got some papers to write! :o) i will be logging off for a few minutes or so then i’ll come back when i’m done. maybe in a couple of hours.
hey, leave me a shout when u can. i always make sure i’ll reply as soon as i get back. take care Chloe.:o)
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hi soulsearcher, i’m glad you like it. :o) yes, i know what you mean. i have read some poems that just captured me into bits.
ohhh those words were from my heart when i wrote it. might have been a few weeks when i posted it here.
now things change. and it hurts when they do.
one day i’d finally let it go.
hi Jessica, thank you , glad u like it too. :o)
Very pretty, good job, & i really liked it!
hello Post it! thank you great thing u like it! :o) nice meeting you!
Thats really good! Very simple, very effective!
hi there hpesoj44, thank you for reading. glad u like it. :o)
you should enter that on poetry.com… i rate it 10!!
thank you BKH, i am glad u like it. :o) you are a good person and someday you will find your one true love. tell us about it when u do!
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hello jim nice to meet you and thank you for saying that. :o)
Yes, i know. But i cant get him off my mind. Hes stuck there. He & his gf are lovebirds. He loved her more than his ex`s. i really need him in my life. But i just dont want him to be my boyfriend.
hello there, how can i help u? u can give me a shout so we can talk about that, okay? hang in there.
I like it! You’re good at this! lol encase you haven’t noticed I’m going through your top 10 hehe ;)
i think i have noticed you are going through my top 10! lol
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