I wanna wake up next to you
I wanna wake up next to you
I wanna see your smile
I wanna hold on tight to you
I wanna hold you for a while
I wanna watch u sleep in peace
I wanna feel u in my arms
I wanna guard u forever please
I wanna keep you from any harm
For you are my ecstasy
You are my delight
My angel you are really
My beautiful angel of light
I am overwhelmed by your love
I am awed by the sight of you
I am certain you are from above
I am certainly one of a privileged few
Gorgeous, wonderful, cute and nice
Angelic in appearance and personality
Sweet as sugar, Smooth as ice
Making me happy is your specialty
Thank you so much for watching me over
Heaven knows how wonderful you are
You’re like my lucky four-leaf clover
Heavens knows how you’ve touched my heart…
the next instalment of my collection for those you like reading my poetic abortions… =)
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whoahhhhhhhh! Kiz, Kiz……Your work doth soothe the raging beast within me…
its not the smoothest work ive done, but adorable like Heather said. I’m glad ur …raging beast… is soothed :) we dont want you going on a rampage now.
Aaaaaaaaw that is so cute Kiz! beautiful! keep ‘em coming! please! I wanna hear more … :o)
I love that poem… it makes me want to get a boyfriend! It was really great. Have you ever made a book and sent it to a publisher?
I’m not interestedin publishing my work, it’s purely for my enjoyment only - and the enjoyment of others :)
Great!!! love it!!!!
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I wanna wake up next to you
I wanna see your smile
I wanna hold on tight to you
I wanna hold you for a while
I wanna watch u sleep in peace
I wanna feel u in my arms
I wanna guard u forever please
I wanna keep you from any harm
For you are my ecstasy
You are my delight
My angel you are really
My beautiful angel of light
I am overwhelmed by your love
I am awed by the sight of you
I am certain you are from above
I am certainly one of a privileged few
Gorgeous, wonderful, cute and nice
Angelic in appearance and personality
Sweet as sugar, Smooth as ice
Making me happy is your specialty
Thank you so much for watching me over
Heaven knows how wonderful you are
You’re like my lucky four-leaf clover
Heavens knows how you’ve touched my heart…
the next instalment of my collection for those you like reading my poetic abortions… =)
that’s super cool…. i will have to try it! thanks
If i still had my Fender I would give that a go… oh Fender, how i miss you so much :(
Oh Kiz, that’s wonderful! It’s so beautifully written, it’s amazing! Keep it up buddy!
Hannah Quagmire invited 1 user to read this post 2 years, 5 months ago.
i wanna put music to Heather’s prose she posted a month or so back, about the gleaming silver rock. that was so awesome.
if i still had my guitar i would try. perhaps i could compose something on the comp… and i understood it, its ok:)
oooh I wish. I’d buy one for my own birthday present if i had the funds. maybe ill wait for xmas then.
that’s amazing… would you mind if i sent that to my boyfriend?
if you tell me who you are, you’re more than welcome too.
i’m just a college girl who is an english major. i love seeing that people are still wrting great poems!!! thanks for the smile!
oh dear u put that in the wrong post lol.
and sure anon go ahead and sendit to ur bf, i hope he likes it :)
aaaah i see the significance now :) im slow, so slow, and silly. and hungry. gee thanks Ant, shame hey. Well thanks heaps for the thought though.
lol and send it halfway across the world? the postage would be enormous! i will justhave to save up for it. and for the things I need to fix on my car too. and for better speakers for my car, but thats less important right tan a guitar. It’s more enjoyable to create music than to just enjoy someone elses all the time.
you’re just sooo nice to me :) and its an ‘if’ all the same anyways.
I can only return the favour as best I can :) lol our convos are all over this place =P I have ‘maganetica power!’ hehe
lol SHOWER! shower shower shower. ***takes on a spooky voice*** ‘you need to shower Heather’
shower shower shower lol. ok now im being silly =P
That is one of the best things I’ve ever heard in my entire life!
awwww
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