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I wanna wake up next to you

I wanna wake up next to you
I wanna see your smile
I wanna hold on tight to you
I wanna hold you for a while

I wanna watch u sleep in peace
I wanna feel u in my arms
I wanna guard u forever please
I wanna keep you from any harm

For you are my ecstasy
You are my delight
My angel you are really
My beautiful angel of light

I am overwhelmed by your love
I am awed by the sight of you
I am certain you are from above
I am certainly one of a privileged few

Gorgeous, wonderful, cute and nice
Angelic in appearance and personality
Sweet as sugar, Smooth as ice
Making me happy is your specialty

Thank you so much for watching me over
Heaven knows how wonderful you are
You’re like my lucky four-leaf clover
Heavens knows how you’ve touched my heart…

the next instalment of my collection for those you like reading my poetic abortions… =)

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Kiz invited 13 users to read this post 2 years, 5 months ago.

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amoonmaiden offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Davidsonville, MD, US | 2 years, 5 months ago (7 minutes after post)

whoahhhhhhhh! Kiz, Kiz……Your work doth soothe the raging beast within me…

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (10 minutes after post)

its not the smoothest work ive done, but adorable like Heather said. I’m glad ur …raging beast… is soothed :) we dont want you going on a rampage now.

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Ditzy offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 40 #
Ventura, CA, US | 2 years, 5 months ago (12 minutes after post)

Aaaaaaaaw that is so cute Kiz! beautiful! keep ‘em coming! please! I wanna hear more … :o)

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Forevermine (no mas) offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Pittsburgh, PA, US | 2 years, 5 months ago (16 minutes after post)

I love that poem… it makes me want to get a boyfriend! It was really great. Have you ever made a book and sent it to a publisher?

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (17 minutes after post)

I’m not interestedin publishing my work, it’s purely for my enjoyment only - and the enjoyment of others :)

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punkette201 offline Verified User (2 years, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (18 minutes after post)

Great!!! love it!!!!

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Kiz edited this post 2 years, 5 months ago. Read the previous text »

I wanna wake up next to you
I wanna see your smile
I wanna hold on tight to you
I wanna hold you for a while

I wanna watch u sleep in peace
I wanna feel u in my arms
I wanna guard u forever please
I wanna keep you from any harm

For you are my ecstasy
You are my delight
My angel you are really
My beautiful angel of light

I am overwhelmed by your love
I am awed by the sight of you
I am certain you are from above
I am certainly one of a privileged few

Gorgeous, wonderful, cute and nice
Angelic in appearance and personality
Sweet as sugar, Smooth as ice
Making me happy is your specialty

Thank you so much for watching me over
Heaven knows how wonderful you are
You’re like my lucky four-leaf clover
Heavens knows how you’ve touched my heart…

the next instalment of my collection for those you like reading my poetic abortions… =)

punkette201 offline Verified User (2 years, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (25 minutes after post)

that’s super cool…. i will have to try it! thanks

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (30 minutes after post)

If i still had my Fender I would give that a go… oh Fender, how i miss you so much :(

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Hannah Quagmire offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Abilene, TX, US | 2 years, 5 months ago (33 minutes after post)

Oh Kiz, that’s wonderful! It’s so beautifully written, it’s amazing! Keep it up buddy!

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (34 minutes after post)

i wanna put music to Heather’s prose she posted a month or so back, about the gleaming silver rock. that was so awesome.

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (39 minutes after post)

if i still had my guitar i would try. perhaps i could compose something on the comp… and i understood it, its ok:)

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (42 minutes after post)

oooh I wish. I’d buy one for my own birthday present if i had the funds. maybe ill wait for xmas then.

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2 years, 5 months ago (43 minutes after post)

that’s amazing… would you mind if i sent that to my boyfriend?

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (44 minutes after post)

if you tell me who you are, you’re more than welcome too.

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2 years, 5 months ago (47 minutes after post)

i’m just a college girl who is an english major. i love seeing that people are still wrting great poems!!! thanks for the smile!

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (49 minutes after post)

oh dear u put that in the wrong post lol.
and sure anon go ahead and sendit to ur bf, i hope he likes it :)

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (54 minutes after post)

aaaah i see the significance now :) im slow, so slow, and silly. and hungry. gee thanks Ant, shame hey. Well thanks heaps for the thought though.

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (59 minutes after post)

lol and send it halfway across the world? the postage would be enormous! i will justhave to save up for it. and for the things I need to fix on my car too. and for better speakers for my car, but thats less important right tan a guitar. It’s more enjoyable to create music than to just enjoy someone elses all the time.

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (1 hour, 2 minutes after post)

you’re just sooo nice to me :) and its an ‘if’ all the same anyways.

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (1 hour, 4 minutes after post)

I can only return the favour as best I can :) lol our convos are all over this place =P I have ‘maganetica power!’ hehe

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (1 hour, 7 minutes after post)

lol SHOWER! shower shower shower. ***takes on a spooky voice*** ‘you need to shower Heather’

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Kiz offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (1 hour, 11 minutes after post)

shower shower shower lol. ok now im being silly =P

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Ash vampyre ~gaara~ offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Shoshoni, WY, US | 2 years, 5 months ago (2 hours, 10 minutes after post)

That is one of the best things I’ve ever heard in my entire life!

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