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what do u think of this poem i wrote im 14years old btw lol ?

some people come into my live and quickly go
some people become my friends and stay a while
leaving footprints in my heart
and now i am never quite the same
you are the sunshine of my life,
you hold the key to my happiness.

you kissed my lips and i felt a flutter in my heart
you touched my hand and lit a spark in my body
you stared into my eyes and saw straight into my soul
you put your arms around me and i was finally complete

I used to dream of beautiful brown eyes
and loving arms to hold me.
i used to dream of how i would never settle
for anything less than best.
i used to dream of fairy tales,
and how real they felt.
i used to dream of a lot of things
but the moment i met you i stopped dreaming
because all my dreams came true

I found one word to describe this,
That word, is love.
I know now these feelings,
For my sweetheart is true;
The man of my dreams,
And my soulmate, is you.

every time i look at you my heart skips a beat,
i wonder if you know,
that my heart is at your feet.
And the rain may be falling hard outside,
But your smile makes it all alright,
Im so glad Im with you
but in the end,
this poem isn’t even half of what i feel for you.
You are more than love to me…
you are everything

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demawno offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Tupelo, MS, US | 2 years, 4 months ago (6 minutes after post)

very beautiful.

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Thepp offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 4 months ago (6 minutes after post)

That’s quite some poem. Wish I could do stuff like that. I think it is very good.

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Mï†z¥-superMODel offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Help.com Volunteer Moderator Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Tullahoma, TN, US | 2 years, 4 months ago (28 minutes after post)

Very nice!!

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JoJo offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Fort Collins, CO, US | 2 years, 4 months ago (2 hours, 4 minutes after post)

That was a beautiful poem. I never understand why people with these beautiful poems wont identify themselves. Although I’m sure I’ve done that at sometime lol Step forward and tell us who you are so we can applaud your talent :)

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JoJo offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Fort Collins, CO, US | 2 years, 4 months ago (2 hours, 11 minutes after post)

Hi Laura! Your poems are beautiful! Thanks for telling me who you are :) My name is JoAnn and I am very glad to meet you :)

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rosieanna offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Radlett, M1, GB | 2 years, 4 months ago (20 hours, 58 minutes after post)

lovley thanks for sharing

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