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is this poem better?

You make me feel special,
You make me feel new,
You make me feel loved,
With everything you do.

You hold me close when I am sad.
You wipe the tears from my face.
Every time we are together,
It seems like the perfect place.

My eyes light up when you enter a room.
I smile when we are together.
No matter how bad things are,
You always make them better.

I love the way you kiss me,
The way you hold me tight.
I love the way you touch me,
I could be with you all night.

I love the way you can make me laugh
For absolutely no reason at all.
I love how no matter what I do,
You will be there to catch me when I fall.

I just want you to know,
That even though we sometimes fight,
I will always love you!
No matter what, day or night.

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Mï†z¥-superMODel offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Help.com Volunteer Moderator Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Tullahoma, TN, US | 2 years, 4 months ago (3 minutes after post)

It’s great!!

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Belitsa, 58, BG | 2 years, 4 months ago (10 minutes after post)

It’s very nice !!!

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Thepp offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 4 months ago (17 minutes after post)

No. It’s as good as the first one. They are both very good. Perhaps you should become a member. We have a lot of good poets on this site.

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JoJo offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Fort Collins, CO, US | 2 years, 4 months ago (1 hour, 35 minutes after post)

That is a beautiful poem. I can’t say if it is better because I am not sure what other poem you are referring to, but it was beautiful.

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