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spiritedsoul
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You called me beautiful

And yet you reasoned that for an excuse to hold me kiss and hug me, even when my consent was none.
I felt happiness and joy before I met you, but I became a bird, your bird. And you trapped me in your cage. You deprived my freedom, and controlled me to an extreme extent. I felt you suck the happiness out of my soul.
You gave me money, but it did not heal the pain that I felt inside.
You asked how you could make me happy, that was something you could never do.
When I told you that I did not want to be with you anymore, you told me to not break your heart. That was impossible; there was not even a heart of yours to break.

please tell me the best way to state the last line. im not sure whats best. thanks. florence x

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Naska offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 3 months ago (6 minutes after post)

What happened if it’s ok to ask?

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Naska offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 3 months ago (8 minutes after post)

Well I get the idea from your post but having a few more details on the last line would help. What feeling made you want to run? Why do you think he asked you now to break his heart? Why do you feel he has none?

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 2 years, 3 months ago (9 minutes after post)

becuase of what he did

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Naska offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 3 months ago (10 minutes after post)

What did he do? Your post tells how it made you feel but not what was done.

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Naska offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 3 months ago (17 minutes after post)

It is about the same guy in your other posts?

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Jade offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 3 months ago (1 hour, 10 minutes after post)

perhaps the last line could be…. your heart was never mine to break

sorry to hear your sadness…

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