I personaliy dont understand it…id have to study it for a while. What are you talking about? the human soul? I didnt quite get it…
it sounds like the technical description of,”I love you” :O)
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I understood it as…
even through time will change your internal and external attributes, your constant soul and spirit will always be what I truly desire.
To me it means even though you’re not perfect, inside or out, the essence of you is what I desire.
I mean, that’s what I heard in my head when I read what you wrote :-)
i was meant even though ur internal attributes change, and appearance changes, ur soul and spirit is what i desire. is that written right first time?
what i understand is, “whatever changes your soul and body will face through time, i will still long for you”
im not sure if it just makes no sense, or too complicated
cos im unsure. i just want it to make sense, thats all
Well it makes sense to me.
does attribute mean characteristic? can it mean appearance too?
and what does essence mean?
it depends on who you are sending it too, i don’t think it is complicated
Yeah, I agree with Saggezza. “Even though your inside and outside might change throughout time, your soul and spirit will always be what I want”
Your essence is basically the root of what makes you who you are, the part of you that stays the same no matter what else about you changes.
i wrote it for this written thing id done
I think attribute can mean a characteristic or apperance.
attributes: Characteristics of persons or things
essence: In philosophy, essence is the attribute (or set of attributes) that make an object or substance what it fundamentally is.
i wrote it as part of this…
The love that I give away is unconditional, free and infinite, there are no limitations and there is always more to give.
I like you because you are different, unique, and not perfect.
When you have the courage to admit to your own weaknesses and mistakes I see strength in you.
Your imperfections are sweet and are the things which make you.
I like all your positive and negative aspects, for they make you the individual that you are.
Listening to you gives me satisfaction because by doing it I hear and learn beautiful things which inspire me.
I love leaving myself and going into your own world, and love to do things your way.
I am happy enough to accept your freedom and you can choose to be with someone else or to not be with me.
I can give you the space to live your life with your decisions and choices how you wish them to be.
Despite negative involvement from outsiders, I will stay by you, even through pain I could encounter as a result.
I am fully aware that infatuation blinds reality and it lasts its temporary thrill, but I can see past this.
I will be willing to sacrifice for your own strong preferences.
I love seeing you express yourself in your own free way.
Even through your internal and external differentiations that will proceed through time, your soul and your spirit will still be what I truly desire.
Being round you lifts my spirit up, especially when you show your natural warm heavenly smile that is truly from within you :)
I enjoy your company and feel so much pleasure for knowing you
i checked for the definitions so i feel it depends on how you want to use the words :O)
I’m not sure “differentiations” can be used with “proceed”, whereas I know it could be used with “occur” instead of “proceed”. But, like I said, I’m not sure :-)
really? why do u think that?
occur might sound better, actually :)
“even through your internal and external
differentiations that will occur through time, your soul and your spirit will still be what I truly desire.”
sound better?
I like it better that way.
Occur sounds better :O)
you wrote a beautiful piece, truly down to earth and pure with exression, i love letter that is full off longing yet mature. I admire your talent :O)
pro·ceed (pr-sd, pr-)
intr.v. pro·ceed·ed, pro·ceed·ing, pro·ceeds
1. To go forward or onward, especially after an interruption; continue: proceeded to his destination; paused to clear her throat, then proceeded.
2. To begin to carry on an action or a process: looked surprised, then proceeded to roar with laughter.
3. To move on in an orderly manner: Business proceeded as usual.
4. To come from a source; originate or issue: behavior proceeding from hidden motives. See Synonyms at stem1.
5. Law To institute and conduct legal action: proceeded against the defaulting debtor.
Can you take out “that will”??
“even through your internal and external
differentiations occur through time, your soul and your spirit will still be what I truly desire”????
Perfect! it sounds much better.
even through your internal and external
differentiations occur through time -does that make sense?
or “even though ur internal and external differentations that occur”
Yup, I think that’s proper. The word “that” can usually, actually, be taken out of most texts. It is often used incorrectly.
Keeping the word “will” in there is up to you… It just gives a different feel to the text.
Sorry, my last reply was addressing your previouse reply… I hit the send button too late. :-)
“even though your internal and external differentations will occur through time” or “even thRough your internal and external differentations will occur through time”
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