[Help] should i post my poems for feedback? Updates to this post /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac Sun, 07 Sep 2008 20:34:35 +0100 Reply from andrew_busines /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac#reply-3746406 Definitely rap with all that bad spelling.

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]]> andrew_busines Fri, 16 May 2008 21:31:23 +0100 Reply from Anonymous /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac#reply-3739224 and its better as a rap but its kind or short… i like it

]]> Anonymous Thu, 15 May 2008 02:43:56 +0100 Reply from Anonymous /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac#reply-3739219 well i was scared to post the songs i write cause some one could take it and get credit for it but wat ever floats your boat

]]> Anonymous Thu, 15 May 2008 02:41:52 +0100 Reply from bevmartin476 /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac#reply-3738791 Would this be a good poem or better as a rap?and tell me what you think about it

I thought you died in my mind along time ago
but your memories never leave they still haunt my soul
I try to leave you but something keeps telling me no
Even though I could never forget you, I have to let you go

And at night I scrub all these mirrors
Hoping to see my face but the image is no clearer
I tried to push this feeling away but instead it gets nearer
Until I can see my face and see the eyes of a steerer

But life wont let me take the wheel
to drive away from you and all that I have to feel
I can’t tell the differance between whats fake and whats real
So instead I sit in the back as we ride these rocky hills

]]> bevmartin476 Thu, 15 May 2008 01:10:32 +0100 Reply from kim, again. /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac#reply-3738779 Why not?
Share them with us, hon. ♥

]]> kim, again. Thu, 15 May 2008 01:07:40 +0100 Reply from Capt. Roltzefly /post/160970-should-i-post-my-poems-for-feedbac#reply-3738773 Sure!!

I will too!

Poem Thread???

]]> Capt. Roltzefly Thu, 15 May 2008 01:05:48 +0100