[Help] Random Poem Competition! Updates to this post /post/178663-random-poem-competition Mon, 30 Nov 2009 00:38:39 +0100 The post was closed by Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-6181007 Dreamer-Eliewved Wed, 06 Aug 2008 18:16:40 +0100 Reply from Pae /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3992425 Harmonium

Bright swirls of colors dawn upon the sky
Irony chimes through our minds, we still question why
10 seconds of peace, 4 more seconds and it’s gone
No one understands just why the pain just lasts so long
Images of fire keep on burning through my mind
Through the bright orange light I think I see a sign
Memories and memories, they hang over my head
Someone turn the light on, I don’t think I’ll go to bed
Questions keep on drifting somewhere in the midst
I think I know a portion but I don’t even know the gist
So someone turn the light on, turn the light on
I won’t sleep yet

‘Cuz you and I both know that sleep is the cousin of death

…I have NO idea where any of that came from, haha.

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Pae Sun, 20 Jul 2008 19:43:51 +0100
Reply from Xeno Dragon /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3986151 http://help.com/post/89002-echoes

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Xeno Dragon Fri, 18 Jul 2008 23:06:36 +0100
Reply from Rocco. /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3986114 I finally thought of one!
It’s not very good, but it’s random alright.
Here’s the link.

http://help.com/post/180608-when-you-…

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Rocco. Fri, 18 Jul 2008 22:59:55 +0100
Reply from WashuChan /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3963909 Its late here so I shall write one more before bed! lol!

here its late I wonder why,
I keep on looking at the sky,

Again I see so many stars,
thinking in the morn I shall put on Cars.

A movie my son so dearly likes,
And its made for little tykes.

He repeats things now I would have guessed,
Him saying Ka Chow is the best.

I laugh knowing my clock is right,
When I wake Ill be quite a site.

For here its almost One am,
My bed I think of in my head.

So as I type my eyes do flutter,
my concentration sways and clutters.

Night night I say with a yawn,
I would like to sleep and dream of fawns.

goodnight goodnight you know to well,
My morning is going to be a living h*ll….
- washuchan.

lol! its true. Im so going to be a zombie when I wake up… one in the dang morning… im so…. tiard. night.

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WashuChan Sun, 13 Jul 2008 04:45:36 +0100
Reply from ¡Nellie.Skywalker! /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3963676 A Limerick:

There once was a visitor from Mars,
Who was shocked to see so many cars.
Well since times were tough,
and he needed more stuff,
he stole one! And is now behind bars.

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¡Nellie.Skywalker! Sun, 13 Jul 2008 02:36:33 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3962132 Mice like their cheese, tis a fact and snuffles is no exception.
She has a nose that’s specialy made, just for it’s detection.
It’s long and thin, is very cute. It will very often quiver.
It’s when it smells that special smell, it makes her stop and shiver.

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thep Sat, 12 Jul 2008 19:34:32 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3962080 There is a frog called Griswold, a happy little fellow.
He is colored two different greens, some brown and lots of yellow.
He has a tongue that is quite long and has big floppy feet.
But for a frog, he is superb. In fact he’s very neat.

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thep Sat, 12 Jul 2008 19:19:35 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3961995 Life is fantastic, if you will let it be.
If you look for the good things but not the bad.
Find the beauty in it, you’ll never be sad.
Life can be fantastic for you and for me.

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thep Sat, 12 Jul 2008 18:58:00 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3961912 Tomorrow never comes, or so I’m told,
this carries on till we get quite old.
So until we die, each second be bold,
Tomorrow never comes, or so I’m told.

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thep Sat, 12 Jul 2008 18:35:54 +0100
Reply from Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3961868 Oaky here’s my 7 random poems.

-And yes. I mean RANDOM! poems!

Random Poem 1
If A is to B,
As B is to C,
Then A must be equal to C.
For if A if to I,
As I am to M,
Then A must be just like me!

Random Poem 2
Spider spider little spider come and talk to me.
Spider spider tiny spider sit right on my knee.
Spider spider baby spider I promise I wont bite.
Spider spider mini spider come to me tonight.

Random Poem 3
Paper clip you’re my best friend
Paper clip you’re sweet
Paper clip so full of love
Paper clipper treat

Random Poem 4
Tonight I sat at my computer
With an orange juice diluter
I sat there tooting on my hooter
Ah here’s my friend the baby pooter

Random Poem 5
Today I’m single
Tomorrow I’m not
Was yesterday different?
I forgot

Random Poem 6
I know a brat
Who had a pet rat
The rat knew a cat that was awfully fat
The cat knew a rat with a baseball bat
That rat knew a brat and can testify that

Random Poem 7
Night Night of to bed
A place to lay your sleepy head
Night Night see you tomorrow
After this long night of sorrow
Night night sweetest dreams
Dreams of Elizabethan queens
Night night get some rest
Tomorrow is the mental test!

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Dreamer-Eliewved Sat, 12 Jul 2008 18:13:00 +0100
Reply from elysium /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3961669 The fields,
are swept upon by a cold winter air
dead leaves,
rise from the ground into the air
water flows,
down the stream with such elegance and care

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elysium Sat, 12 Jul 2008 17:13:52 +0100
Reply from WashuChan /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3961656 This is fun! I actually cant write poetry at all, but it is very fun to try! :D!

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WashuChan Sat, 12 Jul 2008 17:09:24 +0100
Reply from Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3961270 cool poems!!!
You guys are good at this!

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Dreamer-Eliewved Sat, 12 Jul 2008 12:55:04 +0100
Reply from WashuChan /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3959925 When I sleep I wonder why,
Why there are dots up in the sky?

I make my eyes so blurry like,
they fuzz around like little kites.

I laugh and fall into my sleep,
knowing that my mom will shreek,

In the morn when she awakes,
Connor smeared with her brand new cakes.

I still wont wake for I will know,
That its a dream, for I see snow.

Knowing its just a dream,
I think about what is my theme,

Once it was a dream I shook,
A fall from a cliff is what I took.

Insted I thought about DDR,
Arrows and Arrows went up as far.

On and on with jumps and such,
I know I cant do, just not so much!

So I awake to Connor jumping on my head,
“Connor” I say “Waking me you could have said”

“Mommy mommy, I eat I eat?”,
“Yes bubby, just take a seat”.

So thats my night while my eyes were shut,
NOW YOU SEE WHY IM SUCH A NUT!
- By Washu Chan.
lol! Im gonna do this again!

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WashuChan Sat, 12 Jul 2008 01:49:32 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3959224 That bloody cat has gone for good,
of that I am quite certain.
So this poem ends right here,
I pull the final curtain.

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thep Fri, 11 Jul 2008 22:02:20 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3959114 That bloody cat is not so bold,
it’s visits are getting rarer.
It must be going some where else,
since I bought the cat scarer.

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thep Fri, 11 Jul 2008 21:37:15 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3959081 That bloody cat has been around,
it’s done it once again.
If it does it one more time,
I’m bound to go insane.

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thep Fri, 11 Jul 2008 21:28:56 +0100
Reply from thep /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3959021 I hate that bloody ginger cat,
that visits my back garden.
It leaves it’s message every time
and that I will not pardon.

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thep Fri, 11 Jul 2008 21:16:25 +0100
Reply from elysium /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958885 I know the poems were supposed to be off the top of your head, but I just wanted to post the one I started. Sorry :S

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elysium Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:50:33 +0100
7 users were invited to read this post by Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-5901015 Dreamer-Eliewved Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:47:19 +0100 Reply from Anonymous /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958858 My poem i just did of the top of my head coz I was thinking of the original o if it was crap, soz!

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Anonymous Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:44:49 +0100
Reply from elysium /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958852 Well here is part of a poem that I am working on. Remember this is my FIRST attempt and it isn’t anywhere near completion. So apologizes if it s ucks.

A Friend Like You
=================
You can live at my home,
or far away.
No matter what,
I’ll be thinking of you everyday

You tell me you’re loyal,
yet I deny.
However still,
you remain here just to testify

If I am sad or scared,
I find you here
protecting me
making my day and fighting my fear

REMEMBER, this is my first attempt and is NO WHERE NEAR completion.

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elysium Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:43:45 +0100
Reply from Anonymous /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958848 (THE THEME IS COPIED!)
The magic box:

I will put in my box:
A cry of pain;
A smothering scilence;
A towering fern in a gloomy wood.

I would put in my box:

The sweet smell of honey;
the choking smell of smoke;
The way words linger.

I will put in my box:

The beast inside;
The teasing child;
The pointing finger.

My box is carved from ice and cushioned with silk,
It hinges are foggoten words and in the corners supriese do dwell.

I shall slumber in my box in the long swaying hands of the grabbing grass,
and wake up in the drifting snow.

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Anonymous Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:42:52 +0100
Reply from Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958818 I never close posts lol. Very rarely.

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Dreamer-Eliewved Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:38:25 +0100
Reply from elysium /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958805 Cool post! I’ve started to do poetry but I haven’t finished any yet. How long is the post going to be up for?

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elysium Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:35:10 +0100
Reply from Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958800 Here’s another one. Very random of cause.

Spider spider little spider come and talk to me.
Spider spider tiny spider sit right on my knee.
Spider spider baby spider I promise I wont bite.
Spider spider mini spider come to me tonight.

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Dreamer-Eliewved Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:34:11 +0100
Reply from Dreamer-Eliewved /post/178663-random-poem-competition#reply-3958793 Here’s one of mine!

If A is to B,
As B is to C,
Then A must be equal to C.
For if A if to I,
As I am to M,
Then A must be just like me!

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Dreamer-Eliewved Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:33:08 +0100