[Help] . Updates to this post /post/231751- Mon, 22 Mar 2010 01:51:34 +0100 The post was edited by huh? /post/231751-#reply-7625191 huh? Wed, 31 Dec 2008 01:39:19 +0100 Reply from thep /post/231751-#reply-4651355 I think this is going to be one of those poems that goes on to be a classic. Only the first verse has some sort of meaning for me. The rest looks like a lot of disjointed statements.
It doesn’t have any sort of relationship from one verse to the next one. Doesn’t do anything for me personaly.
I am though a bad critic of this type of poetry.

]]> thep Wed, 31 Dec 2008 01:08:16 +0100 The post was retagged by huh? /post/231751-#reply-7624989 huh? Wed, 31 Dec 2008 00:57:28 +0100 The post was retagged by huh? /post/231751-#reply-7624981 huh? Wed, 31 Dec 2008 00:55:47 +0100 Reply from Ashlo /post/231751-#reply-4651308 It’s lacking rhythem in some parts, which I am guilty of all the time

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