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Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 23:54:20 +0100

Thanks :)
[quote ~*M&M*~]:) i liked it[/quote]

Reply from }Fållęn{

}Fållęn{ — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 23:13:37 +0100

:) i liked it

Reply from falling

falling — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 13:09:56 +0100

yeah exactly eddieee

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Thu, 04 Jun 2009 15:15:57 +0100

No, thank you!!! You wrote how I feel..I understand not wishing to hear anymore…Can’t run away, can’t get off, can’t make it stop……
[quote falling]let the thundering roar come
and drown everything else out
cuz I don’t wanna hear you anymore
all these voices in my head
all these broken thoughts
the pain
the shame
just make it all go away
I want to run far away
I want to end it all
just make it stop
let me get off
this ride
I just keep walking, falling towards my ruin
sliding down that slippery slope
not even knowing what I’m doing
pounding
pounding
pounding
in my head
everything is in slow motion
can’t even think a complete sentence can’t even finish a single thought but one
no
words
left

only
this

(just a little inspiration I had, didn’t mean to write a novel lol! but hey, thanks eddiee and spazzyspizzy.)[/quote]

Reply from falling

falling — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 04:40:28 +0100

let the thundering roar come
and drown everything else out
cuz I don’t wanna hear you anymore
all these voices in my head
all these broken thoughts
the pain
the shame
just make it all go away
I want to run far away
I want to end it all
just make it stop
let me get off
this ride
I just keep walking, falling towards my ruin
sliding down that slippery slope
not even knowing what I’m doing
pounding
pounding
pounding
in my head
everything is in slow motion
can’t even think a complete sentence can’t even finish a single thought but one
no
words
left

only
this

(just a little inspiration I had, didn’t mean to write a novel lol! but hey, thanks eddiee and spazzyspizzy.)

Reply from SpazzySpizzy

SpazzySpizzy — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 04:31:57 +0100

wow,falling.thats really good.i definitely relate.

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 04:09:49 +0100

Very nice..I see what you mean..we are not seen or heard…[quote falling]what did I say
what did I do
fear grips my heart
o god
what have I done now?

it doesn’t seem real
two different lives I seem to live
two different realities u see
two different people I seem to be
why can’t u see the real me inside
this is just a façade

why are words so unsufficient
I pour out my soul
but things are still left unsaid, but not forgotten by me
trying to perfect it
I leave out things
things
I don’t admit
ever.

just some random thoughts that came to me, lol[/quote]

Reply from falling

falling — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 04:04:02 +0100

what did I say
what did I do
fear grips my heart
o god
what have I done now?

it doesn’t seem real
two different lives I seem to live
two different realities u see
two different people I seem to be
why can’t u see the real me inside
this is just a façade

why are words so unsufficient
I pour out my soul
but things are still left unsaid, but not forgotten by me
trying to perfect it
I leave out things
things
I don’t admit
ever.

just some random thoughts that came to me, lol

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:54:35 +0100

To little..too late. Will you share something of yours?
[quote falling]some stuff I’ve written sounds a lot like this. its not poetry, I don’t really write poetry, but its written in a poem kind of style I guess you’d say.

do you feel like this is able to capture ur feelings acurately, or is it just so insufficient?[/quote]

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:53:29 +0100

Thank you for this kindness. Lets hope for all of the lost souls…to be better someday.
[quote SpazzySpizzy]amazing as usual eddieee.really sad though.i hope you feel better soon.[/quote]

Reply from falling

falling — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:47:43 +0100

some stuff I’ve written sounds a lot like this. its not poetry, I don’t really write poetry, but its written in a poem kind of style I guess you’d say.

do you feel like this is able to capture ur feelings acurately, or is it just so insufficient?

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:43:19 +0100

Sound like you? How so?[quote falling]wow eddiie u sound like me lol.

so how can I help u?[/quote]

Reply from SpazzySpizzy

SpazzySpizzy — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:43:02 +0100

amazing as usual eddieee.really sad though.i hope you feel better soon.

Reply from falling

falling — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:41:55 +0100

wow eddiie u sound like me lol.

so how can I help u?

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 01:46:06 +0100

I wish it wasn’t mine.. I don’t wish you to be sad. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)[quote Barbyman]Love it ,not long enough to make me sad .But i save things what makes me read it.Thanks its yours,that is what its all about…[/quote]

Reply from Barbyman

Barbyman — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 01:42:49 +0100

Love it ,not long enough to make me sad .But i save things what makes me read it.Thanks its yours,that is what its all about…

Reply from Eddieee

Eddieee — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 00:37:32 +0100

May I suggest you check my tags. Should give you a clue if you wish not to read..
[quote Dr. Ralph]Poetry.com is beginning to get on my nerves…[/quote]

Reply from Dr. Ralph

Dr. Ralph — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 00:29:04 +0100

Poetry.com is beginning to get on my nerves…