[Help] hi, i just wrote a poem for my mom, how does it sound to you? Updates to this post /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom Sat, 05 Dec 2009 05:47:36 +0100 Reply from girl_2_princes /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-4923484 really awesome =D no need any changes great job

]]> girl_2_princes Sun, 05 Apr 2009 04:18:57 +0100 Reply from ww.verona9 /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-3449691 [quote Thepp]No don’t change it its lovely.[/quote]

i love it so pleas don’t change it at all thank you and Happy valentine day.

]]> ww.verona9 Thu, 14 Feb 2008 21:28:40 +0100 Reply from Sybuil /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-3186580 Exelant do not change it one bit

]]> Sybuil Wed, 24 Oct 2007 14:05:18 +0100 Reply from silverstarloader /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1350697 Hi there! Such a lovely poem for your Mom. Don’t change it. It is your own intellect poured in it and when it gets edited or corrected by another it won’t end up as completely as yours. So, preserve it that way. This will get even more meaningful if this is your first ever. For sure your Mom will cherish it coz it all came from you. Won’t it be so sweet and nice to feel seeing her cherish your poem which is an “unadulterated” and a pure one from your very own expression.
Good luck and Happy Birthday to your sweet Mom.

]]> silverstarloader Sat, 10 Mar 2007 14:49:19 +0100 Reply from Enilorac /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1344776 Wow, I love it.

]]> Enilorac Fri, 09 Mar 2007 22:35:07 +0100 Reply from lolo_ /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1344530 that’s beautiful

]]> lolo_ Fri, 09 Mar 2007 22:00:20 +0100 Reply from Anonymous /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1343947 okay. thx

]]> Anonymous Fri, 09 Mar 2007 21:01:54 +0100 Reply from Thepp /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1343924 Its a pleasure.
If you write more poems put on here, lots of other people do.

]]> Thepp Fri, 09 Mar 2007 20:58:09 +0100 Reply from Anonymous /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1343869 thank you

]]> Anonymous Fri, 09 Mar 2007 20:48:36 +0100 Reply from Thepp /post/53184-hi-i-just-wrote-a-poem-for-my-mom#reply-1343841 No don’t change it its lovely.

]]> Thepp Fri, 09 Mar 2007 20:44:06 +0100