[Help] please tell me wether you like this or not. Updates to this post /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this Mon, 30 Nov 2009 18:06:56 +0100 Reply from eresende /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3637302 To be honest I’m a poet and your poems is really getting there i like the way you make sense and the way you express your self to it, you are a great thinker and going in a great direction :) and in my point of view your poem is great hope to stay in toch and dont dought in asking for any questions if needed.

]]> eresende Wed, 16 Apr 2008 16:03:25 +0100 Reply from jac99 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3532444 At the risk of sounding unpopular, your meter is all over the place and I don’t like the rhyme scheme (it’s a bit too Spike Milligan). Sorry. Some of the phrasing has potential but needs heaps of work.

What?

Honesty is the best policy! Someone here ought to be honest, or what’s the point? None of us will learn or improve…

I’m dead, aren’t I?

]]> jac99 Thu, 13 Mar 2008 14:55:26 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3287016 thanks, i think i found this avatar on help.com lol oops.

]]> tomboi2007 Sat, 08 Dec 2007 02:09:32 +0100 Reply from IngeniousNotCrazy /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3280429 That was beautiful, and quite “limericky”. (I love making up words). I also love your avatar… it’s so cute!

]]> IngeniousNotCrazy Tue, 04 Dec 2007 18:06:54 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3233586 i can’t really write songs without help from someone else.

skyler11 what do you mean scared of me? what could possibly be scary? lol.

]]> tomboi2007 Tue, 13 Nov 2007 02:31:27 +0100 Reply from lucindarox /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3226262 I like it.
You could really make it into a song.

]]> lucindarox Fri, 09 Nov 2007 20:37:52 +0100 Reply from Skyler11. /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3225765 it’s hard to determine whether i’m scared of you or love the poem. it’s good though.

]]> Skyler11. Fri, 09 Nov 2007 15:43:17 +0100 Reply from kerreb /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3186537 i liked it
it made me feel all mushy =]

]]> kerreb Wed, 24 Oct 2007 13:19:56 +0100 Reply from ☆ /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3164183 you are always welcome. :)

]]> ☆ Mon, 15 Oct 2007 07:05:47 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3163945 thanks, lilies

]]> tomboi2007 Mon, 15 Oct 2007 04:16:18 +0100 Reply from ☆ /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3158601 don’t worry hun, i’m sure that user has been reported. hugs.

]]> ☆ Fri, 12 Oct 2007 09:17:21 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3158081 well that’s your opinion and you’re entitled to it, but honestly i just put my poem on here to ask people whether they liked it or not and the majority of the people do so ahh well,
a big THANKS to all those who do like it.
and my baby is none of your business and you have no idea what sort of life he’s going to have so if you’ve got to say something like that about my child again think before you do because i love my child and my fiance and your words aren’t going to change that!

]]> tomboi2007 Thu, 11 Oct 2007 23:17:23 +0100 Reply from joj2344344 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3152163 I’m sorry to say but it’s really bad. no talent whatsoever. please dont waste your time writing anymore! u shuldnt even be having a baby at ur age. u make it all sound like fun and games. ur just a child lol. just a stupid little girl. and ur baby is not going to have a good life. :)

]]> joj2344344 Tue, 09 Oct 2007 13:50:02 +0100 Reply from MARCUS /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3108881 AWSOME”"” i like it.

]]> MARCUS Thu, 20 Sep 2007 00:26:06 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3102232 thnks heaps guys

]]> tomboi2007 Mon, 17 Sep 2007 02:34:54 +0100 Reply from bigsisreztle /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3101087 “tell me if you like this or not” No question here!!!! I love homemade sons more thean real songs!!!! They are SOOOOO kewlio– expeicaly yours!!!

]]> bigsisreztle Sun, 16 Sep 2007 15:05:04 +0100 Reply from sunshinealik /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3096667 loves it.

]]> sunshinealik Fri, 14 Sep 2007 01:10:29 +0100 Reply from saettle2 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-3096526 Really good, I would be impressed if a boy gave me that, you should really give it to your girl. She’s so lucky…. GOOD LUCK!

]]> saettle2 Thu, 13 Sep 2007 23:51:40 +0100 Reply from yypezn /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2995819 I though they all close enough. Hum I see

]]> yypezn Fri, 27 Jul 2007 16:50:29 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2994616 no i can only write a little poem when it comes to songs i need help lol.

]]> tomboi2007 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 00:45:54 +0100 Reply from yypezn /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2991440 very romantic. you must be talented in song writing.

]]> yypezn Wed, 25 Jul 2007 05:10:05 +0100 Reply from lena g /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2935424 beatifully written

]]> lena g Sun, 15 Jul 2007 20:43:09 +0100 Reply from BKH199 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2615094 Thats sounds really cool to me!!

]]> BKH199 Tue, 19 Jun 2007 13:57:26 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2448703 yea i wrote it along with a few other poems. but alot of them can be really crap.

]]> tomboi2007 Mon, 04 Jun 2007 23:06:16 +0100 Reply from spiritedsoul /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2444652 romantic. u wrote it? if u have, seems like put a lo of thought into it :)

]]> spiritedsoul Mon, 04 Jun 2007 16:41:46 +0100 Reply from angel_msT /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2070215 I like it…sweet with a spice…makes me feel those butterflies in my stomach…

]]> angel_msT Sat, 05 May 2007 15:58:51 +0100 Reply from apache tear /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2027335 It’s really beautiful. The ryming is wonderful and it gave me shivers as i read. good job! ^_^

]]> apache tear Wed, 02 May 2007 15:49:57 +0100 Reply from lovelylaura /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-2020077 So cute… I wish I wrote that!

]]> lovelylaura Wed, 02 May 2007 00:58:36 +0100 Reply from penguinlove4eve /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1992139 thats really cute=)
i really really like it*

]]> penguinlove4eve Mon, 30 Apr 2007 04:22:04 +0100 Reply from tomboi2007 /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1990759 thanks everyone, i like to hear feedback on my poems just incase they’re really crap.
yea that humor bit, i didn’t mean to add that i just couldn’t think of anything else that rhymes with happy lol oh well.
my fiance and i don’t fight we argue and sometimes we argue but laugh about it at the same time and my mother-in-law is always saying you’re not supose to laugh while you two are fighting, but yea it’s better then throwign things at each other.

but thanks for all the relpys that means alot. see yas.

]]> tomboi2007 Mon, 30 Apr 2007 02:06:28 +0100 Reply from eDy /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1960202 congrats for your engagement,i do love the stuff you wrote and just wanna wish a long last happinest to both of you.

p/s:i’m a malaysian so my english is pretty bad huh? ;p

]]> eDy Fri, 27 Apr 2007 17:47:40 +0100 Reply from Ditzy /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1955291 Is cool … nice that you managed to get some humor in there but also kept it very love-y dove-y … :oD

]]> Ditzy Fri, 27 Apr 2007 09:12:40 +0100 Reply from ☆ /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1954918 *wink very nice!

]]> ☆ Fri, 27 Apr 2007 07:41:58 +0100 Reply from adrianna /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1954766 Beautifully*

]]> adrianna Fri, 27 Apr 2007 06:52:40 +0100 Reply from adrianna /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1954763 Very nice sparkles…I will have to take a minute to get maternal and get worried that you don’t fight. Probably you should throw a huge fit just so he can see if he can handle it :)
Beatifully written, did you write more?

]]> adrianna Fri, 27 Apr 2007 06:52:25 +0100 Reply from Heather: Given It /post/66312-please-tell-me-wether-you-like-this#reply-1953876 i like the rhyming scheme and your choice of words are good i like the humor you put into it too :o)

]]> Heather: Given It Fri, 27 Apr 2007 04:42:32 +0100