i can help with that! ive taken tai-chi for years! please, just give me another chance. im really quite lovable when you get to know me. like a golden retriever!
u dont scare me it never phased me i been thru too much crap to worry about someone trying to black mail me over drugs like itll ruin my life or like ur goal was to do just that just because u dont like me.
The Return wrote: let me be frank, and honest. i would like to put aside all trolling for a moment. no sarcasm, no comments just for the sake of being mean. just the honest truth. maybe this will give you some insight.
i do not think your “poetry” is very good at all. i mean that. i know youre used to being showered with praise from people who wouldnt know art if it fell on and crushed them, but the truth is this: your poems are not anything to write home about. you use unnecessary repetition of phrases, oftentimes cant decide whether to rhyme or not, and there is no rhyme nor reason to your line spacing. are you trying to write a limerick, or a song, or a haiku? who knows? Your themes have very very little variance, its either a saccharine sweet love poem, or something morbid and depressing, and as such, you have demonstrated a severe lack of versatility, PERIOD. Finally, call me finicky or pretentious if you must, but the real poet is able to create a piece with so many layers and depths to it, that there are an infinitely large number of ways to interpret a piece. your poems have one. consistently. no metaphor, no personifications, no margins to look between. If you want to tell a story, just tell a story, dont call it a poem. im sure you would probably be a fairly decent story teller, but as it stands, your poetry is not at all good. i hope you can read this without anger, without hate, and without immediately covering yourself up by saying im stupid or saying something like “wll u dnt have 2 liek it.”, i DO hope, however, that you take my advice and make a better poem.
thank you.
not just me, theres several other people whose criticism you passed off as “being mean”. ill leave you alone if you promise to consider all past and future criticisms, and vow to discuss them intelligently.
actually, i have a written confession. additionally, dont act all pretentious and mature to someone a YEAR YOUNGER THAN YOU. im the same age as you, and im more capable of intelligent thought. lord almighty.
uh no proof i dont have drugs on me and what if all that was just a lie cuz it was just to piss of commander plus im just a 16 year old dancer being accussed by u cuz u dont like me and u use cyber stalking to attempt of scarring me.
You realize you and the good Commander here are just about the same age, right? In which case if i called the police using the information provided in that lovely video of yours, you could be under criminal investigation not only for felony drug charges, but also for underage drinking. your move, my friend.
My favorite part is trying to get someone who is younger than you to go away in a feeble attempt to cover up the fact that he can best you in any intellectual crossroads you may come to.
i saw your conversation earlier. i just wanted to tell you to grow up. if you post your work in a public forum, people will share their opinions. i honestly dont know how you function in society without being able to accept negative criticism, even though it tells you specifically what to improve, and how to do it. stop treating everything like a personal attack and act your age.
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