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My babbbbby :D

xxxx

http://www.upload-mp3.com/public/view…

Whole song sung by me listen if you want… :P

I will give it a go….

D:

We need to do a protest song.

http://www.freetibet.org/about

I’m working on one. Check out the info above and see if you can right one too.

More awareness needs to be brought into play!

D:

Not even The Gents? D:

I loved that one! D’:

http://www.upload-mp3.com/pfiles/1516…

I don’t like it. :(

Oh and no offense but I didn’t like any of the band names…

Brutally honest yet?

Lol…

Thanks for trying it…Maybe we can work something out..The chorus really is the only bit I really need to ahve this way…I don’t know…I love my version of the chorus…

Oh oops! I forgot people don’t understand my language. XD (Sorry!)

I will try your version. But, honestly, my voice when I sing strong songs…Jesus it’s bad! Really bad!!

Still I’ll try. Since it’s your vision and all. :)

Okay not sure what hard core rock-esque is LOL…

Chorus’s need to be different to the rest of the song and they need to be catchy…

Could you try singing my chorus?

I’m not good at being mean… :P

Lol

xx

I came up with some band names! :)

There basically just anagrams though. XD

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The Gents

Anoby

Teren

Akola (or Akoli- Ack-Oh-Lie)
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One’s that didn’t make it to the winners circle were:

Onyx

CrayNation

HELPdotCOM

Noi (N-wa. French something or other)

Koi

I listened to yours.

Very hardcore rock-esque.

But with the rest of the lyrics I think it would be more appropriate for the song to be a on a lighter note. Sweetly sad. Y’know?

And come on, girl! You can be more brutally honest than that! D:<

Let me translate what you said into “brutally honest”:

I like the way you sing and all, but this sucks! I did NOT imagine it being like that!

I like my tune better and stop changing my lyrics! D:<

(THAT was brutally honest. :D)

Okay…

I love your voice, no duobt about it. However I prefer my tune and lyrics for the chorus… I did like the way you sang the verses….Especially the lies bit…
There you go…Brutal honestly…

Did you listen to mine?

How bad is it?

Be brutally honest!!!

Oh my god! That website is so much faster! D:

K I uploaded it on that website you sent me.

My version is a little…well…It’s girly…XD

http://www.upload-mp3.com/public/view…

http://www.upload-mp3.com/public/view…

Me singing the chorus!!! I hope you like it :)

Just got it approved on a “up and coming” band website. I’ll send you the link in a second.

((Need to Verify the song and then the website will email the link))

Hello ;)

Is the song online yet?

Yay! :)

I really don’t mind too much…Just wondering which lines did you change? It’s lal good..I’m just interested :D

I will give you an honest opinion as I usually do to things where you can without hurting someones feelings…

It’s all good I can understand why you wouldn’t be 100% not yet anyway…I have school too..I just never sleep on time for it! :D I stay up pretty late…Often just to talk to people on here..We will try our best okay? o.O

:D

Well! Guess what!

I read your lyrics and I’ve come up with a sampler!

It took me forever to come up with a tune and then when I read the lyrics over a few times I figured to song was gonna be more on the sweeter side. Ah! It’s only the first half of the song and you won’t like it. XD

But I tried!

((I really need better recording equip :P))

Okay okay! Before I get on msn and send it to you I want you to know that

1) My nose was stuffed up
2) I changed a line or two. Still the same song though.
3)that I know it sucks so if you think it sucks just go out and say “JESUS -EFFIN- CHRIST! THIS SUCKS!”

Because we shall not settle for “okay”. We have to perform out best!

And I know I’m…80% committed. Weekends will always be free, but remember school and all. And the time zones may be a problem on week days. :/

Okay. So…As soon as you read this I should be on messenger so be prepared to be disappointed! :D

I’m actually glad you said that…I think we should be more optomisic and actually believe that maybe it will go somewhere :D
I like the idea of giving everyone a bit of attention…I am happy to be recognized…I think that yess we should have signature songs…But I strongly advice lyrics in all…I just prefer listening to mucis with vocals as do many…I adore writing and have actually just written a new song…SONG! I even wrote some ideas about how I want it sung..It has a tune which is very changable…Because I think it sucks… :P

I don’t know about a name…Yay!!!

I think we will need to have everyone 100% committed….So people can’t pull out and stuff…? I don’t want to pressure anyone…I am quite excited and I just can’t wait to get started!!! :D

xx

And Pollu…I wanna lay some things down…

If this thing goes anywhere, which it won’t!, but IF it does I wanna make a few things clear.

I’m tired of the lyricist being a name printed on and album cover in fine print.

IF this gets anywhere you’re going on the cover.

IF this thing goes anywhere I want everybody to have a signature song (like…A song that has a drum solo will be the Drummers song, Bass solo, guitar solo, etc etc)

IF this thing starts to get serious, which it won’t!!!, but IF it does (eh…)I don’t want to be the highlight of the album cover (IF there is an album cover! Which I am designing right now actually XD)

And lastly don’t ever be serious!!! Write because you enjoy writing. :)

Because the goal of the band (what will we name it?) is not to be popular but to see if we can make it work and have fun. :)

Kay…That’s all I got!

(Oh and I think we have a drummer and MAYBE a bass guitarist. :D)

D’you have some laws you wanna lay down?

Ah! Okay! Thank you for telling me that!

K, I’ll check out the other poems. No problem.

A heart is not enough,
I cried when I saw that,
You accepted everything I said,
And just said goodbye in the form of a heart.?

Last verse…

This is actuall the only one I have a problem with you doing…The guy I wrote it for has actually made it into a song and is going to record it soon…Sorry. I have loads more poems…And some actual song lyrics I wrote…Would you like to check them out?

I can understand why you like that one…It’s one of my favourites…

A

This poem?

I don’t know what to say,
I don’t know what to do,
I looked to you for answers,
Answers you don’t have.

I know I am hard to handle,
I know you have done to much,
I know you tried your hardest,
But your hardest wasn’t enough.

I hate to be in a world that rejects me each day,
I hate to breathe air that doesn’t taste right,
I hate to be with people who are tired of me,
Your tired so just give up.

I’m sorry for not listening,
I’m sorry for still hating me,
I’m sorry I am not strong like you,
For you are so strong.

I didn’t appreciate you,
I didn’t say thank you when I could,
I didn’t want to say goodbye,
But goodbye is the only word I know.

A

Hey, Pollu! That poem of your- A heart is not enough?

I got a sample of it and I wanted to run it by you. Don’t really know the feel you wanted from it. So give me a little description of what you imagined and I’ll whip it up.