it sounds like idk some sort of realm or underworld…..the whole cave thing sounds like the mouth of monster and like as if the guy was wandering down its entrails idk…
That first chapter is the weirdest, to me… I didn’t even know it would be a story at that point, so I was combining a lot of different styles. I was trying to use a lot of metaphor, a lot of imagery, and a lot of underlying meanings. Most of it, however, just came from the interpreted memories of places I’d been or seen, filtered through the context of the situation I was in when I was writing it. So, it came out kind of dark.
I’ll have chapter six out in a few days. It’s been on break for a little while due to real-life responsibilities, but I should be getting out a chapter a week pretty soon, if you care to follow the story.
I’ve got other short stories up… no two are very similar, though, I’ve been using this site as a sort of guinea pig for different styles. Ask, and I’ll link you.
living vampire, as to what i have picked up on, are people who dress and try to live like vampires but aren’t and heh interesting fact vlad….i already added u so i’ll talk to when possible…
Yes please i would enjoy to privately talk, if it is suitable for you. dark_death_iii at yahoo. I did not say that you spoke from your religion, but thank you for understanding. Now please i am unsure what you mean by astral vampires, and essential vampires. but i must say this much, all vampires are living, with the exception of very very few, which died, and assumed to the astral realm. A friend of mine had this happen to him. but what i did, it is completely different and i am still unsure how i did this. Either way, please explain what you have on the astral and essential vampires, if it is possible.
thanks vlad and please don’t think that i put any bias into any info that i find…yes i might be catholic/christian, watever, but i don’t let my religion get in the way of what facts there might be out there on vampires or anything….but your right on the whole creation myth of vampires to me it also sounds like a mix of a hoax and parts that might be real that were probably used to scare children and whatnot…but a new breed? that sounds interesting…i know about the psi-vampires, blood vampires, living vampires, astral vampires, and essential vampires…whats the rumor about the new breed?
And i must add to my last shout to you, if you are interested in what i have currently in research, i can give you a brief description of whatever it is you want to know, that i can give.
It sounds interesting, but i must sadly say this. It sounds like a christians tale to scare children. But, parts of this story may be true, such as ‘lilith and adam’ adam has been proven to exist, among other men and women of his time. If you can research into this, it would benefit my research.
And, M’lady, i must point out, that i indeed am what i say i am.
But, perhaps you have other news of things that i have yet to hear, so i will listen. I have heard rumor of a new breed of vampire, and have yet to confirm it.
The three types of pure bred vampire, are the Ancients, mostly known as The Dead Ones, the Psi-vampires, and the Blood-vampires.
I know many ways to kill them, and i must forewarn you that most ‘christian’ enforced beliefs on defenses against vampires is false. Such as Holy water, and Crosses.
Either way, please, continue.I will let you know on what is true and what is not, if you wish. And the things that i do not know, i will research into it, to confirm the authenticity of its value in truth.
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Ok, heres the deal, carlos told me he luved me then started talking about his other girl friends and it sounded like he was dating them now, along with me
But please don’t say anything to him cause I want to work this out with him.