Hi, I need help on a writing paper, and was wondering if I could have you adive on it please, it is my last paper of the school year. can you please tell me what grade level you feel the writing is on.
Thank you so very much.
It seems like you’ve had people betray you when you’ve been open with your emotions in the past before then. I think that’s a general reason people like to keep their emotions to themselves. I believe it was that case for me. Do you know why you do that?
If you don’t mind, I have some comments and questions. Ignore them if you like.
Have you ever found that other people caring a lot about you makes you value taking care of yourself more? It’s happened to me a few times. I have a lot of resentment and hatred aimed at myself, but I fight it because others require it of me. I was quite content with the idea that I’d suffer; I’m sure I deserve it. However, because of how much I care for others that isn’t a possibility. It’s not possible to be a friend to someone without getting benefit from it, for example. So I bear with the dislike I have for things that benefit me.
Also, how do you generally deal with emotions? Often it seems as if a lot of cutting is a way for a person to release their emotions that have been pent up. I think some release emotions in other ways, such as painting, listening to music, talking to others, etc. I’m personally a fan of writing what I feel onto paper.
You should have seen the reply that was removed. It earned a warning after being reported, if I recall correctly.
A lot of people were antagonistic against that poster for some reason.
I’m stuck between pity and intense anger. I can overlook things done against me, but I can’t stand someone who hurts others purposefully. And while I can see some areas this person has missed out on experiencing love… “An explanation of cause is not a justification by reason.” - C.S. Lewis. So somewhere between the two.
You’d have to make your opinion on that. But my opinion can be seen quite easily here: http://help.com/post/438944-trying-to…
There’s a lot to wade through. You’d save time by just skipping to his responses and my replies, I think.
Thank you for your support on my post:) Unfortunately, the mods ate me alive, closed my post and the traffic(volume, not members) didn’t support me. If anything it discouraged me, plus my real life friends said “it is what is is”
I moved on to another project, but I’m still around to listen or help if I can:)