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• can anyone check my grammar,grammatical mistakes and sentence structure please?
  

  Can anyone please check my grammar and sentence structure please?
  
  “That we met was a gorgeous surprise which was fate.
  The surprise, to me, was like an interplanetary journey, a gentle rain, and a rainbow after it.
  
  Years ago, I stood on the unfamiliar street where the city looked like an animal trainer who sorrowed for a while, then pulled a funny face at me and went away.
  The moon played hide-and-seek playfully like a lost elephant among the dark clouds and knew not that man would fail to carry out the promise.
  
  My winter was done. I was like a migratory bird flying across the blue sky, kissing the golden rays of dawn.
  I shed scalding tears into the icy seawater because I had a love that had not happened.
  
  Let me praise you when I dream of you. Become blessed in its imagination of love like the notes of the fantasia on the staff when nobody plays the piano.”
  
  Some of it doesn’t make too much sense … but I guess that’s to do with your writing style, not grammar.
  
  Did I miss anything, anyone?
  - written 8 months, 2 weeks ago

• Can we rise above Darwinism?
  

  [quote New American Atheist]The theory of evolution isn’t the problem. It’s religion that’s the problem.[/quote]
  
  Absolutely true.
  
  [quote Solid]Most intelligent post I’ve seen all day. Thank you for bringing a little reason.[/quote]
  
  I agree.
  
  You propose we rise against Darwinism? I don’t see how we can rise above the truth.
  
  Not everyone fights like animals. No, that is for people who believe their religion is the right one. We’ll leave them to it.
  
  The reason that we can not be one country with one religion is that everyone wants power. That’s the reason religion was INVENTED in the first place.
  
  If people stopped wanting power and control, we’d all know the truth by now, and live in a better world.
  - written 8 months, 4 weeks ago

• When ar they goin to film new moon?
  

  They’re going to make another one?!?
  
  Oh God, what is this world coming to …
  - written 8 months, 4 weeks ago

• WHO WANTS TO JOIN MY EVIL TEAM OF VILLAINS?
  

  [quote Srinh]yes i think it is time to get a new pair, Zone.
  
  Your undies are starting to grow eyes and if i’m not mistaken, i think they just winked at me. Uh, I’m strangely aroused.[/quote]
  
  Those weren’t eyes. At least, not my undies’ eyes. :P
  
  *Special winks for Srinh* :D
  - written 9 months, 1 week ago

• WHO WANTS TO JOIN MY EVIL TEAM OF VILLAINS?
  

  [quote Srinh]yah, it’s a perk of being a supervillain in training.
  
  u always have a fresh pair of undies laid out in the beginning
  
  / & end of the day. :p[/quote]
  
  Well, I guess it’s about time to get a new pair! I found these ones in a dumpster a few years ago, and they’re getting pretty used. :P
  - written 9 months, 1 week ago

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