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• I just want you guys to comment on this video. posted (1 year, 7 months) ago
  Esteban is so cute. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_7MJrbvJcU&feature=feedlik…

• The sound on my computer is completely gone. posted (1 year, 7 months) ago
  Any help?…

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  Hot drinks don’t help, as my throat is very dry and all the drinks do is make my throat bleed.…

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• Haiku poll:
  

  No, sorry I was not clear. What I meant was that I liked your first haiku better, and if you were writing another one movement would be the better way to go. However, I am not very familiar with your writing style so it may be that your haiku is better with a resolving line. But this is my opinion, hope I didn’t confuse you again :)
  
  [quote TheRiseAndRageOfDust][quote Sapphire_Torment]I like the first haiku much better - I think a haiku should be more peaceful, but it would be good to put a deadly spin on something meant to be beautiful. A haiku comes very nice when it is telling a story, so action gives a better outcome :)
  
  this is just my opinion :D if you don’t like, no sweat.[/quote]
  
  Sorry if I somehow messed up the quoting (not sure of what I did, but accidentally did something else; not familiar with the icons available within replies), but thank you for your take. If you wouldn’t mind catering to my curiosity, please let me press a bit further so that I may best understand. You prefer the first for its tranquility, but also would like action; does that mean it is lacking in being a static portrait? If it weren’t for subject matter (which was probably a poor decision to make such a clear contrast between the two in that sense), would you rather like to see movement or summation in the last line?
  
  I apologize for the overanalysis, but to improve in a craft requires understanding, and in writing, knowing and appreciating the audience’s view is of the utmost importance. You have my gratitude for helping in this regard.[/quote]
  - written 6 months, 2 weeks ago

• if a guy asks you out on his day off but your at college
  

  It sounds like a really sweet date - do you think it wasn’t a date?
  - written 6 months, 3 weeks ago

• Can someone very kindly help me with homework?
  

  a very classic one is ‘Wherefore art thou Romeo?’
  which means why are you Romeo?
  
  Juliet wants to love Romeo but finds it hard when he is the very thing she is meant to loathe. She wants to get rid of his name, so he become a nobody that she can adore. Asking why he is Romeo is just her childish way of trying to get away from the fact she loves him and cant change who he is. Romeo just is infatuated at the start but later starts loving her.
  
  So sorry if this is too late - at least you can use it in notes maybe :D
  - written 6 months, 3 weeks ago

• Haiku poll:
  

  I like the first haiku much better - I think a haiku should be more peaceful, but it would be good to put a deadly spin on something meant to be beautiful. A haiku comes very nice when it is telling a story, so action gives a better outcome :)
  
  this is just my opinion :D if you don’t like, no sweat.
  - written 6 months, 3 weeks ago

• my friend has been annoying me more than usual lately.
  

  Has your friend had any problems lately? This could be her way of keeping secure. Talk to her about it, and if you already have, you should not pick up when she calls half the time. So pick up every second time. This is to make sure that if she is in a real emergency, you can be there for her.
  - written 9 months, 3 weeks ago

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