That first chapter is the weirdest, to me… I didn’t even know it would be a story at that point, so I was combining a lot of different styles. I was trying to use a lot of metaphor, a lot of imagery, and a lot of underlying meanings. Most of it, however, just came from the interpreted memories of places I’d been or seen, filtered through the context of the situation I was in when I was writing it. So, it came out kind of dark.
how weird the first chapter was the setting of myself last night kind of….I was out at the beach at night feeling like i was being stalked and i didn’t want to be in the water…..freaky lol
I’ll have chapter six out in a few days. It’s been on break for a little while due to real-life responsibilities, but I should be getting out a chapter a week pretty soon, if you care to follow the story.
I’ve got other short stories up… no two are very similar, though, I’ve been using this site as a sort of guinea pig for different styles. Ask, and I’ll link you.